Finished

I have finished my paper but I know I still have room for improvement. I think I get overwhelmed by my research. This time instead of putting too much in, I left out too much. I had a lot of information on nutritional supplements that I didn't include in my final paper because each supplement would have take on its' own paragraph. I don't know how to take a key point and keep it to one, maybe two paragraphs. I am mad at myself. I could have done better. There were parts of this process that were gratifying, I don't know if I would describe it as fun though. I enjoyed learning more about my topic and how to best research my key points. It felt good to write a solid thesis statement. My advice to someone writing a research paper would be to hold nothing back, and if the information or writing exceeds what is proper or necessary then edit it out.